Coco's Wish By Scarlet

Once upon a time , on one dark, stormy night, a little   girl called Coco slowly walked up to the window of her bedroom, where her pet goldfish swam around in circles. Coco had one wish: to fly. If Coco flew she would be so happy. She sighed and went back to bed. When Coco woke up she felt a little bit  weird. She climbed down her brown bunk bed ladder and walked into the kitchen to get her breakfast. She  gobbled up her cerial and quickly got dressed. Coco climbed on top of her wardrobe and jumped. Coco could fly!                         


Comments

  1. Mr Murphy3 March 2018 at 14:36

    Well done Coco! Could you have got to Coco flying a little sooner so you could describe it? You made use of some adjectives, which I liked.
    Mr. M. (Team 100WC)
    (Snowy) Bedfordshire, UK.

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

The Golden Teacup by Scarlet

BOOM! Another strike of lightning bolted through the sky. Thunder rolled through the ground, waking me up. The thunderstorm kept rumbling through the night. CRASH! I ran outside to see what had happened. The thunderstorm had stopped and the sky was clear. On the lawn was a gold and white teacup. But the teacup was huge. Then it started to shine so brightly that it blinded me. When I opened my eyes I was in a completely di ff erent world....  BY SCARLET 
Read more

Reverse by Katie

After the drama of last night, he walked to the same place. The exact same thing happened but in reverse, his tea cup flew into his hand and then walked home backwards. He then had his trusty cup. The same bird came from the night before, chirped loudly in his ear but it sounded different... more like witchcraft. A curse was put on him.                  By Katie 
Read more

Little Daisy by Jasmin

Little Daisy was turning one. Daisy felt really overwhelmed and started screaming her lungs out, her Mum got her a drink of milk from her antique teacup but that was a mistake. Daisy's face was turning neon pink, she was getting really mad, her king size cot was rocking like a boat in a storm. She held the teacup and bi ff ed it out of the unluckily open window. That was a massive problem. Her Dad had to go down to earth and see if anybody had seen it. Luckily it was still falling down. With a big thud he caught it.  BY JASMIN  
Read more